We were learning to summarize information in to our own words.
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> the war started at 1973.
> they were hungry, and just a teenager.
> Men had to turn twenty to go to war.
> that the war wasn't fun.
> some of the soldiers was not brave.
> they were forced to join the war.
> they were horrific and scared.
> are lot of them lied about there age, just wanted to fight beside their friends.
The war was started at 1973, they were forced to join the war. And mans had to turn twenty to go to war, they thought the war was going to be fun, but it wasn't fun. Some of them lied about their age, just to go to war. Some of them wanted to go to war because there friend were at the war and they felt lonely. Young teenager lied about there age when they were fourteen. When they were fighting in the war they weren't brave else. They were horrific and hungry.
Hi Adi, your information was really interesting and you summarized it well. I found it weird people would lie about their age and want to go to war. Maybe next time you could proofread your work a bit more.
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ReplyDeletei realy liked the facts about how the kids faked there age to go to war and the bit how they were horrific and hungry